From 18b59e69d2e8798dfe6ffece68a83ceae3c6c567 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brian Cunnie <bcunnie@pivotal.io>
Date: Sat, 29 Aug 2015 21:06:25 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Another re-working of the initial description

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 document_root/index.html | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/document_root/index.html b/document_root/index.html
index 066a7ab..f1fe2f7 100644
--- a/document_root/index.html
+++ b/document_root/index.html
@@ -83,8 +83,9 @@ come first in the head; any other head content must come *after* these tags -->
       </ol>
       <p>A developer can install the certificate and key on the
         server, configure the server's name to its sslip.io fully-qualified domain name,
-	(e.g. <i>52-0-56-137.sslip.io</i>), and then browse to the server via HTTPS using the
-	sslip.io FQDN. All in a matter of seconds.</p>
+        (FQDN, e.g. <i>52-0-56-137.sslip.io</i>), at which point anyone can
+        browse the server using the sslip.io FQDN via HTTPS and receive a valid
+        SSL connection (green lock). All in a matter of seconds.</p>
       <h3>How do I use it?
       </h3>
       <p class="lead">First, find your server's IP address to determine its sslip.io hostname</p>